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After we got the rest of our recordings done for the draft, I went home after we had filmed and edited all ofthe footage that we have. As I have put them together, I have realised that a few of the timings (lip synching is out of time) and there are not many people- this was due to the fact our artist couldn't make it, however, I took on the role to see what it would be like when we filmed the final thing and changed outfits so we know when its the artist singing or myself singing. The drafting process was helpful as it has shown us how much time we will need when we film our final version, and we can see if any shot here doesn't quite work we may need to change that.
For the draft of the music video, as the programme that was provided for us at school was not working for us, we were aloud to use Windows movie maker to get our draft complete for tomorrow, however, when we do our final video we shall be hopefully using Adobe Premier Elements.
Mrs Abrahamson and I will go through your video with you shortly. In the mean time I know vaguely what you were trying to accomplish in terms of performance and trinket narrative but it's not worked YET.
ReplyDeletePerformance can cover a multitude of sins, watch this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cjVQ36NhbMk
Here is how to frame a woman's face without using the male gaze
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rFZc4ax4tJs
This one is a narrative with couples, trinkets, the works (not official video and the language is very strong)
http://youtu.be/lWeagFLF9SY
I understand what you were trying to achieve, girls. You have worked hard together. Here are a few observations:
ReplyDelete1.too many inconsistencies in lighting and framing of charcters
2.the Harry Potter poster needs to go! It spoils the focus of the camera on the charcters.
3. try interspersing the sofa footage with exterior shots to break it up a little
4. experiment with editing to make those trinkets look like links rather than just close-ups of a hand holding them.